i am not alone

Posted: January 30, 2010 in my creations

The night, it is deserted
from the mountains to the sea.
But I, the one who rocks you,
I am not alone!

The sky, it is deserted
for the moon falls to the sea.
But I, the one who holds you,
I am not alone !

The world, it is deserted.
All flesh is sad you see.
But I, the one who hugs you,
I am not alone!

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Comments
  1. icespice says:

    hmmm different 4rm yur regular 1z

  2. icespice says:

    yur title is ri8 🙂

  3. Gypsy says:

    Your poem miss out this time. I didn’t feel the connection. It is for the last stanza that goes over my head. Otherwise, a nice attempt.

  4. Gypsy says:

    I will like to read improve version 🙂

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